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Hi Andrea,

Please view the history on this WisdomCard as I made quite a few changes.

http://organizedwisdom.com/index.php?title=Pleasure_Seeking_in_Hypomania&diff=753580&oldid=665739

I rearranged the research note. Keep in mind that the research note needs to be precisely on topic for the WisdomCard title. The first sentence in particular should address the title. In this case, it's still not exact, but it's better.

Please also see how I referenced the same source more than once as a citation. That links them together in the references section.

On the links, a few of them needed to be "deep linked" further. Instead of linking to the first page of an article on bipolar, they needed to link to the section on hypomania. Ideally we'd have links that specifically address the full title (Pleasure Seeking in Hypomania), but when the closest that can be found is hypomania links you want to get the user as close to the information they're seeking as possible.

You also had two links with "vias" that didn't need them. You may have gotten there via MedlinePlus, but the "via" notation means that MedlinePlus would be the one hosting the information. For instance this link: http://www.nlm.nih.gov/medlineplus/ency/article/000926.htm would be A.D.A.M. (via MedlinePlus)... it is syndicated content licensed from A.D.A.M. and presented on the MedlinePlus site.

Lastly, none of your redirects were correct. Those were all redirects for OTHER WisdomCards. You want alternative titles for THIS WisdomCard. And they need to be exactly for this WisdomCard. Hypomania Symptoms, for instance, is it's own topic, not a redirect for this topic. (Ditto on the others you had, they are all their own topics.) Please see the ones I added. In this case, it's mostly about doing the title in lowercase -- so it can be easily interlinked from other WisdomCards -- and just rearranging it a bit -- such as Hypomania and Pleasure Seeking.

Hopefully this all makes sense.

As for your question about how many you can take out, I'd like to see you turn in one that needs less work before you start working on more at one time. I don't want to dampen your enthusiasm -- I want you to do well and I love your eagerness to work! -- but, I want to be sure everything is clicking for you before you get too far ahead and have to fix the same errors repeatedly.

Thx!

~Nicole

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