Good job! Here are some changes to help you make this card excellent....
Watch your spacing. Looks like all through the Card you are missing the space after the colon, before the opening square bracket around the link. Also, you need spaces around the | when you have multiple links for one resource.
Also, and this is not required, but when you use a resource like National Cancer Institute multiple times, you can reference it as "National Cancer Institute (NCI)" the first time, then as simply "NCI" in subsequent references. This applies to any of the institutes/hospitals with long names that often go by acronyms (WHO, CDC, ACS, NINDS, etc).
Fast Facts:
- Please add some. The last sentence of your GuideNote will make a good one.
5 Great:
- For the ACS link in this section, just link to the first page of the Detailed Guide (http://www.cancer.org/docroot/CRI/CRI_2_3x.asp?rnav=cridg&dt=69).
- Nit picky, but you don't need the .com in MedicineNet.
- I would also move either Cancerbackup or eMedicine up to 5 Great, replacing Wikipedia (which you have down in What is anyway, which is a good place for it).
What is:
- Please add this additional eMedicine link: http://www.emedicine.com/med/TOPIC2705.HTM
Symptoms:
- Please change the NCI link text to reflect the section of the page it's linking to.
- For the Cleveland Clinic link, please link directly to the signs & symptoms section (http://www.clevelandclinicmeded.com/medicalpubs/diseasemanagement/gastro/gallbladder/gallbladder.htm#cholan_signs) and change the link text to Cholangiocarcionoma: Signs and Symptoms.
- Please change the U of Virginia link text to What are the symptoms of bile duct cancer?
- Please change the Baylor link text to What are the signs and symptoms of gallbladder and bile duct cancer?
- Same for WrongDiagnosis, please match the link text to the page titles: Symptoms of Bile Duct Cancer rather than Bile Duct Cancer.
Causes/Complications:
- What section of eMedicine are you wanting to showcase? Please indicate that in the link text, and try to link at least to the top of the section that contains that information.
- Please change the NY Times lead-in to A.D.A.M. (via The New York Times).
- Please change the WrongDiagnosis link text to Gallbladder and Bile Duct Cancers: Causes.
Treatment:
- The WebMD links are NCI info, so please use NCI directly, or change the lead-in to credit NCI (via WebMD).
- Please change the Mayo Clinic link text to Bile Duct Cancer: Treatment Options.
Alternatives:
- I think rather than a commercial site warning on Health World, that one should have a controversial warning: {{Warning}}
- Please change the Johns Hopkins link text to Gallbladder & Bile Duct Cancer: Nutrition.
Types/Stages:
- Please change the Centers for Pancreatic and Biliary Diseases link text to Types of Bile Duct Tumors.
- UpToDate is, unfortunately, an excerpt from a paid article and not the full information. Please remove it.
- WebMD is NCI info, please use NCI directly or credit them in the lead-in.
- What section of the Japanese Journal of Clinical Oncology are you trying to highlight? It looks like you can link to sections of the article. Or, you may just want to move this to Journal Articles.
Prevent:
- Please change the InteliHealth link text to Gallbladder And Bile Duct Cancer: Prevention.
- Please change that last lead-in to International Network For Cancer Treatment and Research and the link text to Biliary Tract Cancer in Nepal: Prevention.
Wisdom:
- Please add lead-ins to the first two links: Google Groups & MD Junction.
Foundations:
- Please link to the Bile Duct pages at ACS & NCI, this is one place it's OK to duplicate links from earlier on the page (so basically, they'll be identical or very close to the same links as used in 5 Great).
Journal Articles:
- Science Daily can be moved to Wisdom. Those are written more for the lay-person, so can fit in Wisdom.
- PubMed link isn't working. Please fix it.
Redirects:
- I added a couple for you. Please try to do these on your Cards. Here are the instructions: http://organizedwisdom.com/OrganizedWisdom:Redirects
Thx!
