Hi Lei,

(Infinit-o applicant)

Below are my comments with regards to this card:

(1) In general,Acanthocytosis is synonymous to condition as Bassen-Kornzweig Syndrome and Low-Density Beta Lipoprotein Deficiency. It is therefore important that site such as WebMB (http://www.webmd.com/skin-problems-and-treatments/acanthocytosis) is on the top 5 as it gives the reader initial perspective on the disease.

(2)You may move "GeneReviews: Chorea-Acanthocytosis review" in the top 5 as this another derivative of Acanthocytosis.

(3) Please remove 5 latest headlines as no search result both for topix and googlenews.

(4) In What? Please add:

a. http://www.vet.uga.edu/VPP/clerk/Gunter/index.php A Brief Review of Acanthocytosis

b. Put medlexicon on number 2.

c. Have one what? (definition) for Abetalipoproteinemia

see: http://ghr.nlm.nih.gov/condition=abetalipoproteinemia What is abetalipoproteinemia?

d. Have one what? (definition) for Bassen-Kornzweig Syndrome.

(5) Remove what is acanthocyte

(6) In Symptoms

a. Retain WD. Add deep link to e-medicine "Clinical".

b. Remove the rest of the symptoms.

c. Add http://health.nytimes.com/health/guides/disease/bassen-kornzweig-syndrome/overview.html Bassen-Kornzweig Syndrome. Please add scroll down warning.

d. Look for add symptoms.

(7) Remove all causes

a. Cite WD

b. Cite http://health.nytimes.com/health/guides/disease/bassen-kornzweig-syndrome/overview.html Bassen-Kornzweig Syndrome. Please add scroll down warning.

c. Cite:

Causes, incidence, and risk factors: http://www.umm.edu/ency/article/001666.htm

d. Look for other causes and complications.

(8) Check for further information on Treatment, Holistic, and Prevention, Blogs and Foudation.

(9) In Scientific - should be listings only- PubMed, JAMA, Google scholar.

(10) Listings only on clinicaltrial.gov.

(11) Revised Guide notes based on your own words.

(12)Add more links to additional disorder.

Thanks, Martin

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